Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Most of Paper

Hey guys! So I have almost completed the draft of my paper and thought that maybe it'd be a good idea to post what I have done so far and have anyone read it.  Any constructive criticism is appreciated!

 “Poor Little Rich Kids”

            In 1983, American’s were stunned to learn that Karen Carpenter had been pronounced dead at a California hospital.  While being only 32 years old, she weighed only 108 pounds and her death was caused by cardiac arrest due to a strain placed upon her heart by anorexia (Young).   Karen Carpenter had suffered from anorexia for most of her life; her father, Richard Carpenter recalls that she was a “chubby teenager” (Young).  Not until she collapsed performing in Las Vegas and was told she was “35 pounds underweight” did she realize that she needed help (Young).  Even now in 2009, this is not an unusual scenario in the US; many celebrities have been treated for or watched for eating disorders.  While the media flashes the images of emaciated Mary Kate Olson or Lindsey Lohan young teenagers sit at home wishing they could look just like them.  The number of eating disorders diagnosed in the US has been consistently going up over the past few decades-particularly in affluent areas.  Why are eating disorders more prevalent in affluent areas in teenagers?  I believe that eating disorders are more prevalent in affluent area teenagers because of new diagnostic testing, pressure by the media to look like celebrities, pressure by men to be model skinny, and pressure by high-income parents to succeed.

            Over the past 50 years, the ability to diagnose eating disorders and other psychological disorders has increased which has lead to an apparent increase in the eating disorders being diagnosed.  In the 1970s people finally began to publicly discuss a mental disorder that had been around since the 1870s (Kahrs).  Over the past 40 years, the disease has been studied extensively in both the United States and Britain (Kahrs).  Now in the 21st century, the ability to diagnose various mental disorders is so much greater.  In a phone interview with an eating disorder specialist, Dr. Jamie Gayle said that there is usually an underlying psychological disorder such as “bipolar disorder, anxiety disorders or other addictive behaviors” (Gayle).  Since technology has advanced over the past few decades, the ability to diagnose these disorders has improved, therefore the perceived number of cases has gone up.  Because of increased ability to diagnose psychological disorders, the number of people with eating disorders has increased.

            In this new age of technology, the media constantly alters women’s ideas about

how their bodies should look based on how celebrities bodies look.  Teenagers in affluent areas “ [know] a thing or two about dieting, fitness, and cosmetic surgery” and they learn these things from various media sources (Martin 95).  But what they do not know is that every photo is retouched: a process by which editors remove excess body fat they do not like, put in ripped abs and cover up any blemishes.  Vanity Fair, US Weekly, and People Magazine, regularly have articles about the latest celebrity diet fads and exactly how to get that look the celebrities have.   After watching the covers change week by week, it seems that these magazines virtually never place pictures of an average sized woman on the cover.  As L.A. Times reporter Emili Veslind points out in her article, “Fashion’s Invisible Woman”,  “The average American Woman is size 14.”   Instead what these magazines offer are images of “miraculously disappearing Nicole Richie” or the “once full-cheeked Lindsey Lohan” (Martin 144).   The media is manipulating the minds of young girls into believing that skinny is the way to be and that they should do whatever it takes to be that way.  A study done by Anne E. Becker M.D. in 1995 on people in Fiji, saw an increase in dieting between 1995 and 1998.  She interviewed some young teenagers in affluent areas of Fiji, and they cited “the appearance of the attractive actors on shows like ‘Beverley Hills 90210’ and ‘Melrose Place’ as the inspiration for the weight loss,” (Derenne & Beresin).  The pressure that the media places on young girls to be skinny and look like the celebrities causes young girls to develop eating disorders to fit the mold.

            Boys and men place pressure on women to be the “ideal standard of beauty” (Worsnop).  Finding a true love or soul mate is always on the minds of young women from the time puberty hits.  One of the main things that most women worry about is that “they will never be able to attract the hypercritical male sex” (Martin 184).  This idea of attracting the hypercritical male makes most women worry about their body so they begin to diet excessively to keep their idea of what size a man wants.  Courtney Martin interviewed many men, in her book Perfect Girls, Starving Daughters.  She found that none of the men lust for “women who spend the bulk of their free time obsessing over the size of their thighs” (Martin 187).  Why do women still believe that men want a skinny mate?  It is believed this stems from the 1950s when women were expected to be skinny and the perfect housewife.  Even though most men will not admit that they want this “ideal” woman as a mate they do still hold that idea on a pedestal.  The pressures placed on women by men to have the perfect figure causes young women and women to stress more about their weight.

Friday, April 24, 2009

Junior Theme Intro

So, it just occurred to me that maybe I should post my introduction online so that other people can read it and give me constructive feedback. Please read and give me feedback! I'd love to hear anything that you have to say! Body paragraphs will be posted soon! So here it is:

“Poor Little Rich Kids”
In 1983, American’s were stunned to learn that Karen Carpenter was pronounced dead at a California hospital. At only 32 years old, Carpenter was 5 foot 4 inches and a shocking 108 pounds; her death was caused by cardiac arrest due to a strain placed on her heart by anorexia (Young). Karen Carpenter had suffered from anorexia for most of her life; she was the daughter of a celebrity and she was a “chubby teenager” who was always being watched (Young). Not until she collapsed performing in Las Vegas and was told she was “35 pounds underweight” did she realize she needed help (Young). Something that used to be so uncommon is now a usual scenario in the US; many celebrities have been treated for or watched for eating disorders. While the media flashes the images of emaciated Mary Kate Olson or Lindsey Lohan young teenagers sit at home wishing they could look just like the celebrities. The number of eating disorders diagnosed in the US has been consistently going up over the past few decades-particularly in affluent areas. Why are eating disorders more prevalent in affluent areas in teenagers? I believe that eating disorders are more prevalent among affluent area teenagers because of low self-esteem, pressure by the media to look like the celebrities, increase in diagnosis of psychological disorders, and pressure by high-income parents to be perfect.

JR. Theme Update

I am sitting in class just thinking about everything that I still have to do on my junior theme but instead of stressing out and having a panic attack I am calm. I feel really good about the whole paper. I have completed my interview, read many of my sources, worked on my bibliography, and gotten my introduction almost finalized. I am feeling really great! After some technical difficulties, my interview went great! I was soo relieved to have completed it! I interviewed Dr. Jamie Gayle, who works at Insight which is an eating disorder clinic that operates on the North Shore. She was very helpful and gave me a ton of answers to many of the questions. She also gave me very helpful information and statistics. Infact, she also asked me to e-mail her my paper when I have a final draft! I was ecstatic that she wants to read the paper. I feel good about my paper. Not very stressed out, however, I am planning on working on my junior theme for most of this upcoming weekend. I just have a request, could we PLEASE be in the library some more! I'd love it if that was possible!

Thursday, April 16, 2009

JR. THEME RELEAF


After the initial panic of junior theme and working on it and getting everything finished I seem to have a handle on everything that needs to get done. I am still feeling very rushed and pressured to move faster and get everything done but I have calmed down a bit. I have begun reading my book and many other sources and I also have an interview set up for Monday. I am still concerned however that it is going to be a race to the finish and that we are just going to be running, running, running until this paper is due. I don't have that much of a problem with it, it is more that I have other things that must be done and I am sort of seeing the whole, junior year kills you thing. I knew it was coming but I am having trouble adjusting the it all. I love high school and everything, but I CAN NOT WAIT for it to be the end of the school year and summer. Even though I am aware that summer, may not bring the same relief that it has brought in the past, I am totally ready for it to be the end of the school year to have all of this stress GONE!

Wednesday, April 8, 2009

HELP!! Junior Theme!!

After having our Junior Theme for about a week or so, we are supposed to have an idea for our book. I am not there yet. Every time that I here from someone saying that they are doing really well with their junior theme I feel ridiculous because I do not seem to be on the same page. IS anyone else feeling this way? I am also having trouble believing that our introduction is due next Monday! I am not feeling prepared at all!! HELP! Any Suggestions??